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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-18 06:51 AM


Sky Seeding


let us
take harvest
of clouds
and if
our yield
be tears
so it
shall be
the gathering
in just
one season
will be
worth all
the effort
so let
it rain


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


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Toerag
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2003-02-18 07:31 AM


Nice write slick one...how are ya?
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-02-18 10:04 AM


let it rain... lots of us could use a rain.

enjoyed...

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-18 10:45 AM


Wonderful!
Your words hit an inner depth...always.
Eric

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Georgia
4 posted 2003-02-18 11:25 AM


wonderful piece!
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