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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-02-18 03:40 AM


It is absolutely amazing to me
how close you and I are, when
the distance of miles
between me to you
and you to me
is so
far

We are closer than some couples are
who are sitting or lying or
standing right next to
each other, with no
distance in space
between the two
of them
Yet, so much distance has come
between them, though their
bodies are next
to each other,
their hearts
are far
apart

My heart and your heart are bonded to
each other, and we feel so close
all the time, regardless
of the space between
the two of us, we
are always
together
as one






© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-18 03:41 AM


now I can relate to this...a little...

great stuff, as always

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2 posted 2003-02-18 05:25 AM


Love is in the air, love is in the world of virtuality too!

angsana

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3 posted 2003-02-18 05:45 AM




Ethel,

You and Gary's love is so precious.
How blessed you are and wonderful you share your experience with us.

Hugs and Love, Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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4 posted 2003-02-18 05:52 AM


This is so true ,  I can relate
although we are oceans apart
I remain in closeness to someone
to be forever heart to heart
Hope

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5 posted 2003-02-18 10:32 AM


Dixie, it is true, isn't it? Sometimes a couple has grown
so far apart that they seem to be separated by a million miles
when they are actually right next to each other. My Love
and I both know this and are really working at keeping
this from happening.
And, on the other hand, even though a couple isn't together,
they can be so connected that they actually think alike.
We do that a lot........

Heart hugs to you,
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-02-18 10:36 AM


angsana, thank you for reading and replying.
I appreciate your comments...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-02-18 10:41 AM


Thank you, Pat, for your sweet reply.
I always appreciate your comments. You are very sweet...

Heart Hugs from
Ethel

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8 posted 2003-02-18 10:44 AM


Hope, you sound as though you relate
perfectly. It is possible for a couple
to stay close, even in distance, isn't it?
And the closenes they build that way is
usually very strong and lasting...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-02-18 12:47 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, as always your love poems always make me cry, but not in sadness mostly but in joy knowing your golden heart and how I know just how you feel and that I await ever so much the day you two finally are together forever as I would love to go to your wedding if I could and hear the poetry on that special day for you, one of my dearest friends! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, it won't be too much longer you'll have to wait, I know it with all my heart for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2003-02-18 01:17 PM


Thank you, Noah, for replying with
just the right words, again. I
appreciate your comments so much....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-02-18 02:49 PM


So true. Your love for Gary is stronger than a lot of people who live in the same building. This is one of my personal favorites.

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        remeber me

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12 posted 2003-02-18 03:36 PM


So much is said here,
with so much wisdom and beauty.
Thanks,
Eric

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13 posted 2003-02-18 04:31 PM


Hi Liz  
I'm really glad that you liked it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

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14 posted 2003-02-18 04:35 PM


Thank you, Eric....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

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15 posted 2003-02-18 04:47 PM


So very true! You say it beautifully. When love plays in the hearts .... distance is never felt.
Love, Margherita

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16 posted 2003-02-18 05:05 PM


"Absence makes the heart grow fonder" ...thanks for the passionate reminder!

Rf

[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (02-18-2003 05:05 PM).]

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17 posted 2003-02-18 05:11 PM


Very beautiful     I really enjoyed it and can relate quite well.  You have a wonderful way of wording and expressing things.  Thank you so much
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18 posted 2003-03-05 03:15 PM


Margherita, thank you. Have I told you that I think your name is really pretty?

Robert, thank you for your nice reply.

Shlee, thanks for replying so sweetly.

I really appreciate all of you.
Hugs,
Ethel

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