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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-03-22 07:34 AM


Trinity

A trinity of phantom hosts
Hangs my wall in painted ghosts.
Imbedded in symbolic paint
Daubed in hues of thoughtful taint.

Brought to secondary life
An inspiration of my strife
To slow the hours in its chime
To magnify a part of time

It hangs my wall for fifty year
And holds in it, some of my fear
Offers me some paths of goal
Titillates my very soul.

It speaks to me in youthful cry
A cry that’s turned to tired sigh,
But yet it fascinates my mind
It reads like Braille unto the blind.

It shows a bend of human wend
A problem without an end


© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-22 07:36 AM



Good morning Sy! I'm glad I was still logged on
to have a chance to read this treasure....


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2 posted 2003-03-22 09:06 AM


Beautiful morning read Sy!
You always start my mornings with wonderful words...
and very wise messages.
~Morning hugs & tea~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-03-22 09:52 AM


Wonderful indeed!! Thankyou for this interesting read this morning Seymour. A little dabble of strawberry preserves with toast to-day? hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-22 10:47 AM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

I found it intriguing that this poem has "Trinity" in it's title and the word "tittilate" in its body---much like the man who wrote it!  

Peace and Love,
EA

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-03-22 11:14 AM


This title was epic...

Sy,
You have a way of plucking the heart chords... Such good thoughts, even the struggles have a sweet spirit of motivation.
Smiles from ThisDiamond

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-03-22 11:47 AM


Sunshine
Me too,

Nancy,
Hugs back,

Chris,
strawberry preserves yummy.

Earth Angel
You sure your 100 percent angel, LOL

ThisDiamond,
Delightful comment, enjoyed.

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-03-24 02:48 AM


SY - this is beautiful! How cleverly you have put them all together xxoo
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8 posted 2003-03-24 02:52 AM


Seymour, I love the way you rhyme.
I wish I could do that with those
rictameter poems. I'll just have to
practice more.  

Don't know how I missed this yesterday.
Glad I didn't now.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-03-24 03:13 AM


~sigh~
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-03-24 07:16 AM


littlewing
So glad you flew over this poets nest, LOL

Ethel,
You do very well, hugs.

passing shadows

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11 posted 2003-03-24 04:07 PM






(sigh) Oh Seymour, trinity should never be treated like a four-leaf clover, for every single three-leaf clover represents such a  bounty to the spirit and know all your relatives are watching over you! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-03-24 04:58 PM


Noah,
Thank you for the read and comment.

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