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The Joy Of Loving You
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The Joy Of Loving You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Alan Ayers * * * * You are the sun behind the clouds On a cold Winter's day You are the reason why I smile As you chase my blues away You are the whisper in the wind That carries words of love so true I became a better person On the day that I met you You are the treasures of the ocean Hidden deep below the sea Your love is like a precious gift That's been bestowed upon me You are the lyrics of a love song Penned from a musician's hand Your love captures my attention As our hearts take command You are the music in my heart Playing love's heavenly tune In your presence I could fly And reach up and touch the moon * * * * "Your words are my food, your breath my wine." I am in motion |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue...the pleasure in voting for this piece is all mine..and very genuine. ~Hugs sweet poetess~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This was deliciously delectable!-- Enjoy your just desserts! Love & Light, Linda |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi Sue, your poems are always so filled with love and passion. They are just delicious.  |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Really a beautiful and romantic piece! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Really a beautiful and romantic piece! Betty Lou Hebert |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is so beautiful. I love it.  "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-21-2003 12:39 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue - I love your writing - so happy - and uplifting and these: "Your words are my food, your breath my wine." are just lovely xxoo |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I do enjoy your work, Sue...  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Very beautiful... This one deserves a place in the book. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, sorry for my belated response as I was away yesterday in the mountains! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, you have my joyous vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
"Your words are my food, your breath my wine." Nice ending to a beautiful poem and picture Thomas [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (03-21-2003 07:57 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - you are a romantic indeed, this is stunning.. My vote is in... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A stunning write. Always enjoy your works. ThisDiamond |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely romantic writing...James |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I enjoy your writing, too. This is wonderful and I liked the last two lines. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful! |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
romantic, lovely, a pleasure to read hugs, kelly |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
beautiful! what romantic poetry is all about Rf |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue, I am happy to vote for this piece. I just love your romance poems. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well done, Sue. This poem speaks so well to the heart, and pulls at the lonely heart to become complete. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Perfect love song of your heart! Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hugs, Sue... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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