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burndu2
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since 2003-03-20

Posts 3

0 posted 2003-03-20 07:43 PM

The white knight did come today
To save the lady from her grave.
But they both found quite a different fate
For he could climb every hill
But the one she crafted with her skill.

Her Hercules could not defeat this creation
Because this was beyond his own imagination.
For he slipped and fell upon his head
And almost ended up dead.
And when he woke to the dreary night
He saw the most disturbing sight.
It got to have a small delightful treat
For he was too torn up
And way too beat

They both are now—old and grey
He is still living in that creature—everyday.
The lady can only now, sleep and dream
Of how she went to the extreme.
Because she wanted her white knight
That had to be very godly like.
This is the only type of perfection
That she would show her love and affection.

So please don’t make that hill
To hard for us to climb.
So we may steer each other clear
And shield each other from that fear.
Because if that knight’s dream did come true
He would find someone just like you.

Amara
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.

1 posted 2003-03-20 08:00 PM

Ooh, I like this. It has a tone of fantasy to it, which immediately draws me, as well as a simple, clear lesson. A good one, too. ^^ Nice write.

Blessed Be Thee!
Stephanie

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2003-03-20 08:07 PM

*drools* ohh where are my manners!? lol Welcome..I Loooove it!! Knights..love..chivalry I'm there *swoons* look forward to more...ciao

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

3 posted 2003-03-20 11:00 PM

its an alright write...welcome

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

4 posted 2003-03-21 12:37 PM

;clapping:

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-03-21 08:57 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special greeting!

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-03-21 09:06 AM

Yay!!! Welcome, dear knight, there are other knight poets here who will be so happy to invite you to this round table, this is a marvelous and magical debut, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

7 posted 2003-05-02 11:59 PM

Welcome to Passions... Scott.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

Magistic Silver Mage
New Member

since 2003-05-09

Posts 4
Montana, U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-05-16 10:06 AM

Nice Write and Welcome. Hope you have a great time here.

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