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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-03-20 04:53 PM


“WITH ABANDON”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Place your hand right here over my heart,
feel it play in tune with a bluesy beat,
it must have been born inside my bones,
for I just can’t stop moving with my feet…

Doesn’t matter if I’m playing with that Guild,
up on the stage singing and all of that,
whenever I hear those sounds it gets to me,
I get grooving on down, and start to format…

I’d rather be out on that dance floor moving,
playing on that sweet guitar making it sing,
dance feet slipping and a sliding across,
searching for you wanting some renewing…

Hips swing just right with the chords strumming,
then you meet mine in sultry rhythmic motion,
dance with me, and my guitar one more time,
we three with the blues, inside with abandon…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
rosepetals25
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1 posted 2003-03-20 07:08 PM


Let me get my dancin shoes on   I liked this... a passion for music is a good thing.  To bad I have no rhythm LOL.

Seriously though.. good write

Tara

"wake me up inside
call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-03-20 07:27 PM


Mmmm, love that bluesy beat Bill.
Come...dance me.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

WhiteRose
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3 posted 2003-03-20 07:40 PM


What a lovely write Bill.  I feel like dancing now.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-20 07:52 PM


...yes, I can feel your heart beating...

My, oh my! This certainly is a provocative, bluesy ruse...and I'm sure it's working it's magic all around the world...

A beautiful orchestration!

Peace & Love,
EA

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-03-20 10:59 PM




i swoon
this tune
of june
nights under
moon..................aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i need summer, soon...........

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6 posted 2003-03-22 08:22 PM






(smiles) Oh Bill, this is wonderful, sweet friend, how I'd love to get out there too and do the same, you've got to lose yourself in the music! (big hugggsssssss) This got me on my feet, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2003-03-22 09:42 PM


This was great Bill. Can't help but smile in the music. TD
Margherita
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8 posted 2003-03-23 07:32 AM


Dancing through life .... with passion. You know the rules!
Very much enjoyed.
Love, Margherita

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