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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2003-03-17 10:00 PM

the following light
          changes the clouds
          from hues of pink
     to sees of orange

the wind whispers
          a morning memory
                   sparrows dot
                         the frame

and, I'm suddenly reminded
            of the difference
                     between
               7:00 and 7:15

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2003-03-17 10:02 PM

Sven--like the capture of time here...each minute so important. Good to see you!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-03-17 10:25 PM

yes, thoise increments of time, a second here and there, spring opens up more and more

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-03-18 10:09 AM

And you didn't even mention the difference between being free to enjoy the world awakening and trapped at a desk subject to the werk monster's whims! LOL

I like this very much, Sven... and it's good to see you posting! *S*

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-03-18 10:12 AM

Sven - how true...time passes so quickly, and if we blink...we might have missed something utterly wonderful....like this awesome write which is going into my library! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-03-18 11:07 AM

Most miss this sort of moment very observant to catch it in this piece. Good to see your poetry again

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-03-18 11:35 AM

A fine writer has a keen sense of observation and I'd say that is why you are a fine writer!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

7 posted 2003-03-18 07:25 PM

Your words spread sunshine where it hasn't been for a long time. Enjoyed very much!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-03-18 08:04 PM

Sven - I relate to this so much - just amazing - I once photographed a Hawaiian sunrise by time lapse - this - your words - ring true . . . xxoo

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2003-03-18 09:19 PM

thanks everyone. . . it's nice to be back. . . I've missed it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2003-03-18 11:50 PM

the simplest words do say it best...and i've missed your thought-provoking poems with splendid formatting..

[This message has been edited by kaile (03-18-2003 11:50 PM).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-03-19 06:32 PM

nice

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-03-19 07:59 PM

(smiles) Yep, it is essential to always watch what's happening out there in the heart of nature or you may miss something as stunning as this if you live by the ocean or like that! (big huggggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

13 posted 2003-03-19 08:33 PM

John,

I love your poem. Welcome back.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

14 posted 2003-03-19 11:01 PM

It's been awhile since I've seen your name... to be fair, it's been awhile since I had a chance to stop in lol.

It was good to see you and your words, as always I liked

Tara

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-03-19 11:06 PM

Sven, this is a really good write, that's
totally true. Thanks for sharing your insight.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

16 posted 2003-05-28 04:56 PM

I never replied to this? I love the way you capture the time also.

Lovely writing...lovely you.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

17 posted 2003-05-29 02:38 AM

oooh!!! Love this!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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