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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-16 11:10 PM



Song Drops

descending drops
of darkness
is an echo
of wet lines
playing
tender moments
the sound
plays a song
streaming
through the night


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1 posted 2003-03-16 11:16 PM


This is so beautiful. I love the words and everything.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-03-16 11:25 PM


Helen, this is so pretty..

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~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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3 posted 2003-03-16 11:31 PM


Beautiful poem!
passing shadows
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