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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2003-03-13 12:42 PM

                    Goodbye, My Friend

                    let it rain
                    on cries and calling pleas

                    from swollen cloudbursts
                    I'll seek surcease
                    but not before
                    in shudders more

                    I’ll wonder why
                    when all seemed right
                    your warmth is gone
                    in your goodnight

                    I loved you dearly
                    every day
                    but now in tears
                    for long I'll pay

                    goodbye, my friend

                                      ©   031303

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2003-03-13 12:44 PM

Krawdad...Can feel the sad of this in the way you write it. Wishing you the best!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-03-13 12:44 PM

the anguish in this touches deeply. An exceptional write my friend..

well done

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-03-13 01:39 PM

Haunting, and pensive...
thank you, Krawdad...

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-03-13 01:50 PM

So well written. You got right to the ~heart~ of the matter. At least to mine, capturing exactly how I would feel and do, through you.

Enjoy your talent.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-14 09:28 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh E.J, I send many hugs your way, sweet friend, I have lost friends and this deeply touched my heart as we cna all relate to this, know your friend will always love you and guide you with love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-03-14 10:16 PM

Thnk you for this...
I had to say goodbye to an old friend today.
Very fitting.. Hugs.

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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