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Friendship and Love
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Friendship and Love |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
Friendship and Love I need to ask you a question and i need you to be true what is happening between us, and what do i mean to you? Are your feelings for me coming back, or were they always there? i need to know how you're feeling this frustration i cannot bear My feelings were never really gone i tried to keep them away but they just seem to get stronger each and every day I don't know how you're going to react, or how it will work out i just need to know the truth so my mind will have no doubt If you have no feelings for me i need to know this too it may hurt for a while but some how i'll make it through But if those feelings are still there then come and tell me so it may be hard for both of us but i really need to know No matter what happens i'll ALWAYS be your friend please don't forget that our friendship will never end. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I loved the way your words flowed. And this poem has a lot of truth to it. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Friendships are every bit as important as love is. Very well done.  Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
Shayne I love it..... Love KK |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I just had this very conversation not a week ago... this would have made it all that much easier. Great write. ~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one... |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Nice smooth write Shayne, you've done it again. Beautiful. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shayne - the eternal question: what is happening between us, and what do i mean to you? nice writing xxoo |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Mm now that I dig!! Wish that was around when i had that question about a certain girl.... A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful piece! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Shayne, this is really a good poem. Very heart-felt..... BTW, It's a very good thing if a couple can be friends first of all...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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