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Silver_Tryst
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0 posted 2003-03-11 08:26 PM


This is about letting go of the past, but the difficulty it will take.....


The Battle Of Mind & Body

The constant battle between body and mind,
A frightening awakening, my bodily bind,
I need let go of my past and sorrow,
To recapture the strength of my weakened soul,

But how do you cure a broken Heart?
forget the past, let the future start?
But, one mistake will start the hate,
Distrust must be my fate,


© Copyright 2003 Shayne Kenichi - All Rights Reserved
Amara
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1 posted 2003-03-11 08:28 PM


You remind me of a dear friend...I really like the poem, both for it's beauty and the reminder of my friend. ^^

- Stephanie

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

Connel
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2 posted 2003-03-11 10:00 PM


Dont give up, and do trust people! You can trust al least one person in your life.. Just dont ever give up hope.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-12 03:50 AM


A battle that can be won...many have done it...james
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4 posted 2003-03-12 08:14 AM


I thought that I could never trust another man enough to give him my heart after I was hurt so badly by my deceased husband. Now I've given my heart to my Love, but still sometimes the fears and doubts try to creep into my mind. I am very blessed that my Love is so understanding and patient with me when this happens.

Never lose hope, because there is someone out there who will love you as much as you love them. It comes when you least expect it, sometimes. My Love and I were not looking for anyone when we found each other.

Hugs,
Ethel

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