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Beautiful Dreaming
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Beautiful Dreaming |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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You captivate me moving me from mortal plane to something more divine If I could dare touch you would the fantasy end or merely a climax to our little starlit rendezvous A thousands words have I penned with you in mind and still have more still waiting to be born On this spring eve pausing from writing to see a falling star and as it touches earth I swear I feel your gentle kiss Oh my beautiful dream may you never leave my soul Even so my pen will always remember. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brad Pretty, pretty, pretty. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh Brad, this is very nice indeed! Enjoyed, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Fantastic write I'm not much for romantic poetry anymore but this tugs on heartstrings [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-11-2003 08:28 PM).] |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
A thousands words have I penned with you in mind and still have more waiting to be born My, that is pretty... nicely done. the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I hope you never stop writing!  Oh, and how did you think of the wrods you write, I mean. They are normal words, but you make sound so much more then that. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
keep that dreaming going...if that's what's behind writes like this  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
A thousands words have I penned with you in mind and still have more still waiting to be born Wow...that is beautiful... But I still haven't figured out what to do with all those words that haven't found their way to the page and just keep floating around in my head instead.... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
write them now reorganize later |
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