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Walk a Rainbow
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Walk a Rainbow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Walk a Rainbow I’ve walked a rainbow in the sky. From end to end upon a sigh But found no treasures at its end. But many pleasures in its wend. Euphoria pervades the air. And titillate each gloomy care. And songs of angels hover the stroll. To charm the sounds of bells that toll. Butterflies stayed to paint their wings. With scepters that were made for kings And dewdrops dripped into some shells. For drinking at some wishing wells A moment in a paradise Full of angel cake and spice A seem within a dreamers wile. A rainbow in the grandest style I’ve purchased me a season’s pass. Its shape is shaped an hourglass. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I'd love to have some angel cake in the park today, maybe the rainbow dancer will come out and fiddle with the zephyr! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Finally!!! I didn't know what to read while having coffee this morning. Nice to read ya Sy...  ! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Seymour  I just got here, too. I didn't have to look you up like I do when you come real early and I'm late getting here.  Anyway, it's good to see you and your beautiful poem of rainbows. They are beautiful, aren't they?  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Fine one (as always) Sy. You just keep belting them out it seems. fh |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very good Sy, a rainbow is always one of my favorite sights, this one was no exception..gentle smile |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A great story of hope and dreams, nicely told. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
An uplifting write Seymour. I didn't know what to do with the extra cinnamon rolls this morning...  but I saved you the biggest one!!  hugs, Chris"Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I don't often tell you - but I do start my day with your poem every single morning. Sometimes I am rushed so I thought it best to tell you, I do read every single one and do have favorites. I liked the image of this one, but then it rains so much here, rainbows are all we have to look forward to after downpours. A hug for Isabel too please. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. Duncan There was trouble with the site this morning posted late. Glad you enjoyed the read. Ethel, Yes both kinds of rainbows are wonderful. Fred, It's always a pleasure to have you read and comment. Logan, Yes as I said both kinds of rainbows are beautiful. kayjay, So glad you enjoyed. Chris, You are a sweetheart,  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are a pleasure to write to and for. Sorry about the rain, but rainbows are nice. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Butterflies stayed to paint their wings. With scepters that were made for kings And dewdrops dripped into some shells. For drinking at some wishing wells ================================ my oh my oh my sweet Sy...I wish you could see the smile on my face...that AWESOME verse alone was worth the wait to read you today If I was there I'd give you a big tinker-hug for this cadence kiss of bliss and those rhyme divine closing couplet. You rock Stinky...and it rolls me  |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Ahhh... well I get here late, but I must say Mr. Seymour, that your poetry goes well with vanilla coke too! This was a wonderful walk to end a day that has been too long. Thanks for posting it ...it is my smile for today. the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, A hug from Tinkerbell is all I need And it always comes in words of your read. And as for Randy, you just damn well turn him on. WWRS icequeen And your reply gives me my smile for the day. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tell Randy he makes a moth PURRRRRRRRRRRRR LOL *winkiewinkie* Love ya Syguy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm late..I'm late... So sorry Sy! ..But better late than never! I thought your post had been eaten for breakfast by the server! Wonderful write..now I'll be able to sleep tonight.  ~Nite hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
lol.. Pretty good poem, its just funny how you can write about anything.. Good job! Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Silver_Tryst Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 64MT |
i love the choice of words,shells and wishing wells, beautiful, i love the poem Shayne |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
You are no doubt one of my favorite poets! Just when you think you can't get any better you surprise me with such beautiful words that the poem seems to move through my blood. I love your work, dear Seymour! You do such wonders with your pen!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the images you paint, and the richness of the hues you use.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’ve walked a rainbow in the sky. From end to end upon a sigh But found no treasures at its end. But many pleasures in its wend. It's easy to concentrate so fully upon the destination that we forget the joys the journey has to offer... thanks for this beautiful reminder! *S* I loved every line of this, Seymour! *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Euphoria pervades the air. And titillate each gloomy care. And songs of angels hover the stroll. To charm the sounds of bells that toll. This reaches far and wide and rests so lovingly before my eyes. Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You just set Randy off again. Nancy, Glad you caught it, hugs. Connel Thank you so much. Shayne, That makes me happy. KoKo And your replies do wonders for me. Pilgrimage Please except my thanks. suthern You are a symbol reader. LOL |
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