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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-03-11 01:39 PM


     
The Voice Of A Gold Sunrise & Silver Moon…is you
~*~

When I have a day I can give you
all my heart
it will be under the glow of the moon.
Does this sound foolish to you?
Ah, but when March winds blow
fires stir
so I know this time
it’s not just a sweet dream.
It’s there, in the light of the moon
I’ll fall in love,
and nothing will matter,
except for the light in your eyes
until dawn…
then my heart will be hushed, at first,
intently looking for some loving sign,
and as I open my eyes
if I see the butterfly dance in your eyes
then I’ll blush like the colors in a sunrise
and become like a sun-struck dove
swept high by the winds of romance
swirling in the deep blue of your eyes,
and like some kind of firelight
the voice of a gold sunrise
and silver moon
will once again call me
and it will be your voice
I hear
and I won’t be afraid
anymore

~*~
BloomingRose








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Connel
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1 posted 2003-03-11 03:09 PM


Nice words. Nice way to end also!

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

ctowen
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2 posted 2003-03-11 03:10 PM


I hear the echo even now ....
    a greatly inspired piece.

Beautiful thoughts Deb.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-03-11 03:14 PM


One of my favorites...enjoyed..James
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-03-11 04:03 PM


BloomingRose~
There is sheer delicacy in these thoughts~
BEAUTIFUL !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2003-03-11 05:16 PM


Your words set me adrift on the little boat in the beautiful pic. Lovely. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-03-11 05:20 PM


Deb, this is just how I feel about my Love...and even though others may think it's silly, I don't. I hope you don't mind me keeping this one in my library. It's so beautiful.......


Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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BloomingRose
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7 posted 2003-03-11 07:56 PM


Connel~ Thank you much!

ctowen~  So glad you enjoyed.

JamesM~ You're too kind, but I'm glad you liked it.

Marge~ Hey girl! Thank you so much. Always nice to hear from you.

NightS~ The boat and picture is rather soothing. Thanks for reading!

GarysG~ You are always so sweet! Thank you!

Marshalzu
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8 posted 2003-03-12 04:14 AM


This is such a beautiful poem, the title drew me in and I'm glad I had the chance to read this, thank you for sharing

Andrew

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