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Open Poetry #25

Look Down at Me

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-03-11 01:40 AM

Look at me and wonder why,
ask me and I'll tell you how I want to die.
Look down at me a tell me not to cry.
Ask yourself, what is wrong.
I'll answer you, I really have no clue.

But as I sit and contemplate,
I shatter in my heart once more.
This weakness I inflate.
Each day passed goes to show, even when you snore.
That I will live or die and never know why.
And I'll answer you.
Just ask!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-11 01:41 AM

Kellie, this is sad...very painful to read, but I like it and can relate

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-03-11 02:23 AM

I don't like being looked down on.. especially with eyes that sting so much. Maybe if people actually meant it, or lived like they meant it when they asked 'why' then we could answer a bit better then "I don't know"
good write, sad, though.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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