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rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
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Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-03-10 01:46 AM


Beer 2


sorry, this is my second poem about beer in as many days,  I'm just pumped up for spring break.


I take a sip.....

Thus begins our magical trip.

I have only one;
you and I both know I'm hardly done.
As I begin number two
I'm really starting to enjoy you.
As I reach for three;
our love must be!

On the fourth, I head outside, just by myself;
needing to further damage my health.
I need some nicotine -
if you smoke, you know what I mean.
Heading back inside,
continuing on our magical ride.

While I was out, I gagged I choked,
just because I have to smoke.
I had number five.....

continuing on our ride.


I had number seis,
all of it's gone, without a trace.
Let's skip seven, eight and nine,
all of them were simply divine.

On to ten and then eleven,
if I drink more will I see heaven?
12 answers that question,
no turning back, no second guessing.
Beer, you always teach me a lesson.

The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another.

© Copyright 2003 James Ian Craig - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-03-10 01:48 AM


yep...I know
rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
2 posted 2003-03-10 01:51 AM


it's a good lesson though, never anything harmful
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-03-10 04:14 AM


rk lol - and yes I do smoke - made me smile twice today - well not about the health risks of smoking and drinking but that Krusty head up there lol xxoo
DarkSide_Blues
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since 2003-03-08
Posts 41
Fl, Usa.
4 posted 2003-03-10 04:17 AM


Again, for some reason, the Beer poem cracks me up...Not because of the actual poem, or the meaning behind it though! Those, I actually enjoy. It's just for some reason, when reading that poem there, it just reminded me of "Mr. Toads Wild Ride" o_o. Weird right? lol
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-03-11 11:59 PM


Have fun in the sun and be careful for goodness sake,

Might be a good idea to leave your keys where you can't find em!!  

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