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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
I Think I'm Loosing You Out of my life is where you're headed. There you go flying away, when all I want you to do is stay. Stay with me, in my life..... I thought we promised to be there for each other in good times and in strife. Remember all those happy times and how we'd wish they'd last forever? Or what about the times we tried so hard to keep our friendship together? Boy, what a great endeavor. We laughed together and smiled together. I didn't want those moments to end. Why are you leaving me now? I thought you were my friend. I guess things aren't working out like we thought they would. Two friends aren't staying together like they should. Our inside jokes, will they be forgotten? Yeah I guess so. New jokes I must now be taught then. We used to say, "I love you." That phrase once had great meaning to it. But now those words are old and worn. Those words can't mend a heart that's torn. You say it'sjust impossible to still go on as friends each and everyday. But I don't think that's so. Let me help you undestand the real meaning of frienship, so that you will truly know: Friends stay together no matter what. Our special bond, our tie, can never be cut. In each others memories is where we should remain. My dear friend, if you don't understand this what am I to do? My heart will be forever in pain. I don't want to lose you That's why I'm holding on tight. I know you don't believe my heart filled words, but I guess that's why I pray for you every night. I'll never forget you. Please don't forget me. "Don't let fear's bronze weigh you down. Courage is wings,so melt the bronze and fly honey!" |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
I'm moving this to Open #25, where it will get more attention than it will in a Discussion forum. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Welcome to passions! Your debut was quite touching and I look forward to reading more of you work. Overall I think you will enjoy the diverse poetry and discusion you will find here at PIP. If you have any questions or concerns do not hesitate to contact a moderator or use the Q&A forum in the "Discussion" sectoin. ps: check your e-mail for a surprise! -majnu -------------------------------------- Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet. [This message has been edited by majnu (02-16-2003 10:09 PM).] |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
thanx for the card. i'm new to thise whole poetry thing. that's one of the first times i've ever put one of my poems out in the open. adjusting ever so quickly, quiet acquiescence |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dannie, ~Welcome to Passions~ Yes, it is always sad when friends move away from us. New interests and becoming wrapped up in new chapters in life, seem to change some of us. The loyalty shown in this poem is admirable. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Dannie, this is such a sad and heartfelt debut, sweet friend, it is sad when we have to move on but I know deep down you have many special friends who will never forget you and will always admire you, yay, this is wonderful, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Dannie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dannie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-16-2003 10:11 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post! I'll be watching for more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
well, qa, don't be shy around here because everyone is freindly and gentle with their critiques unless you specifically tell them not to be  . PIP is like a second home to many of us.-majnu -------------------------------------- Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet. [This message has been edited by majnu (02-16-2003 10:14 PM).] |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! I enjoyed this sooo much. Miss some of MY friends as well! KEEP WRITING |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Welcome to Passions, Dannie. I really enjoyed your first post and look forward to seeing more of your poems. It's really hard to put the first one on a forum for everyone to see, but it gets a lot easier, believe me...LOL I haven't been here for very many months, but this is like a second home to me. I love it here, and I hope you will, too. . . Ethel.....garysgirl  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-16-2003 11:22 PM).] |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
i feel for you friend as I too am going through a similar experience. I'd like to share this with my "friend" if I may. Good write on such a sad topic |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!!! This is an awesome first poem. i really liked it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WELCOME! I love this piece...and can relate so much to it...you will love it here! And we will love having you as a part of the family of friends! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Dannie! Karilea |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Heart-filled words...I like that metaphor. Enjoyed the read! Welcome! CD |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Hello, and welcome. I am sure that you find a place here that is a retreat away from the world, and people who will support you in any way that they can. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
This is such a beautiful poem. It brings back memories of past friendships that I had. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your poetry. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
Hi This is a very nice poem. I can relate to a lot of it. I know how you feel about posting your poem. I'm new too and I just revealed one of my poems to the world for the first time last night. I was quite hesitant at first but my friend convinced me and I'm really enjoying it. I hope you have an enjoyable time here too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful expression of your feelings...its times like these that we realize that we really have no control over anothers final choices...they may or may not want to be our friend for any of a thousand different reasons...of course it is disappointing to lose a friend we value...James |
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