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rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-03-09 03:15 AM

Why Beer? Why?

I take a drink;
immediately overwhelmed.
You gently kiss my lips;
sweetness on my tongue.
You ease down my throat
cooling it down.
Gently glide into my stomach
and swirl around.
Enter my bloodstream
leaving it defenseless.
Right up to my brain
leaving me senseless.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-03-09 03:22 AM

Ours is not to ask why...cheers

KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2003-03-09 09:17 AM

LOL It leaves you senselss huh? Hmmm LOL

SexyCowgirl19
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since 2003-03-08

Posts 24
Colorado, USA

3 posted 2003-03-09 02:53 PM

this is a great poem, but it lacks imagery, but you wrote it so well that it doesn't need inagery. keep up the good writing

Emma

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2003-03-09 03:02 PM

I know the feeling!

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2003-03-09 03:15 PM

LMAO...you buying? Great beer poem or kiss poem...whatever it was!

Connel

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since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-09 03:17 PM

Beer is good, if you dont g crazy on it.. For instince, getting drunk every night, not good. I mostly like wine, and mixed drink

. Dont relly like beer.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

7 posted 2003-03-09 03:31 PM

Ahhhh... I believe the question should perhaps be Why Not Beer? LOL

Good one - I enjoyed it

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-03-09 03:56 PM

lol Ice - rk - top o the mornin to ya - hehehe xxoo

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-03-09 04:57 PM

thanks all. This is different from my normal poetry, but I was in a jubulient mood last night

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

10 posted 2003-03-09 05:32 PM

I'm with the ice queen on this one.
As a matter of fact, I'm indulging in a Killian's Irish Red at this moment, while doing laundry and reading fine fun poetry.
Here's to you!

DarkSide_Blues
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since 2003-03-08

Posts 41
Fl, Usa.

11 posted 2003-03-09 05:54 PM

LOL Dude, that's awesome. In the words of the immortal Largo (for all you MegaTokyo fans out there), B33r M3! ....*eyes Connel* ...<_< >_> heheh.

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