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my first poem bout love "To My One And Only"
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my first poem bout love "To My One And Only" |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
I didnt really know where to put this poem and i settled with putting it here...it was written for my boyfriend... ======================================== To My One And Only I'd take you in my arms, and hold you really tight I'd cry myself to sleep, if I couldnt say goodnight I'd walk a thousand miles and sail across the sea Just so I could have you close to me I'd wake up every morning and call you right away I'd do it even if you werent gonna die that day I'd destroy an army to simply safe your life I'd do anything I could to make you feel all right. I'd fly right through the sky Just to get to you I do not need a plane I only need a broom. I can tell you I love you But it wouldnt be enough Theres more feelings than I can express But I know I feel real love. I can't begin to tell you Everything you make me feel I am so in love with you That I sometimes forget its real. It would take a decade Just to tell you all I'd like to say So i'll write it out on paper Before you slip away. (c) Amanda Becker February 14, 2003 I usually post to dark poetry but i have not had much taste for dark poems lately...All critique is appreciated.. Manda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's LOOOOVELY! This Love of yours surely would make you fly on the broom .... Welcome! Margherita |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
thank you for your reply....I am wiccan so flying on a broom actually makes a lot of sense...hehe...thanks again... Blessed Be, Manda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...do you really fly on a broom? James |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
i am wiccan tho i'm still learning the broom trick....practice is supposed to make perfect, right? oh well, i've had a couple crashes.... Manda |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
have you tried the new Nimbus 2000? *tee hee* "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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PoetOfDarkness2002 Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 41Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world |
 no i havent...i'll have to check it out...hehe ~*Manda*~ |
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