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Insomnia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Another night yet spent contemplating . . . wishes and dreams lived through a different me I sometimes wish that the sunlight would not shine upon my face |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
I know this feeling all too well, nice write littlewing and sweet dreams  |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
If I could just remember my dreams perhaps I might feel the same... Whether the light be of the sun, the moon or our own minds always there are shadows. Nice expressive writing. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY sweet and sea - dreams - hmmmm - dont know what those are - cant remember mine either xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yea...I know |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, I get this way quite often...  Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY shadows and garysgirl - I think we all do at times xxoo |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
wishes and dreams lived through a different me I love this part! Very nice write - I enjoyed it, littlewing! I'm a terrible insomniac myself, so your title drew me right in.  Some nights I don't sleep at all. the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
gosh...you put it so well :-) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you ice and Kristie - didnt realize there were so many who would indentify exactly quite like this xxoo |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
insomnia is terrible. I get it a lot! Great work! |
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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Excellent piece, Enjoyed! Sperari |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
WOW - none of us sleep now do we - TY Guys xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, so sad  enter the sunlight, dreamlover waits again, returning to me thru sleeps passage |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, back when I was a boy all I wanted was sun, but all I got was darkness, believe me, you belong in the sun so let your dreams be embraced! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SexyCowgirl19 Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 24Colorado, USA |
Good write, it is honest and insightful, keep up the good work. Emma |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele - Noah and Emma - TY so much - I wrote this thinking nobody would feel this way xxoo |
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