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Open Poetry #25
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DonFurr
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0 posted 2003-03-08 12:47 PM


Do you love me
as I love you
Would you care be
my lover too

My soul seeks
an answer
whenever I see you

and the vision of
all your beauty
you is never lost
from my inner sight

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-03-08 12:50 PM

Did you get an answer? Love the longing in this one.
sweetwater
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Perth
2 posted 2003-03-08 01:09 AM

*sigh* this is sweet and the words ring so true, that uncertainty that is often within us.. nice write

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-03-08 01:11 AM

very passionate
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