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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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New York

0 posted 2003-03-05 11:32 PM




Reach
to the stars and beyond
Fly . . .
fly away . . .

Take what I have taught you and live for today

Live long and see
what matters to me
For you to own
yourself alone

Tread beyond us both
with pride
confide

and trust in yourself
to be the most
you will ever need
to succeed


(For my son, Billy - may you shine)


© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-03-05 11:35 PM


This is so sweet. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-03-05 11:36 PM


a mothers love shining through into her
child's heart, reall nice, as a mom, i can feel it too

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-03-05 11:57 PM


This was so touching and filled with a Mother's love.

I really enjoyed reading this littlewing~


wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2003-03-05 11:57 PM


"Live long and see
what matters to me
For you to own
yourself alone"

No child, could wish for more.

Ed

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-03-06 12:02 PM


awww you guys are so sweet -

loner - thank you so much
inked - TY I feel it in your writing as well
Blues - TY - means a lot to me
wranx - coming from you that means the world - was my favorite part - the message
xxoo

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-03-06 12:38 PM


Just you being there for him and there's no doubt billy will fly
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-03-06 01:07 AM


Raph - you just made my night thank you so much sweety - it meant more than you will ever know xxoo  

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-06-2003 01:08 AM).]

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2003-03-06 06:49 AM



All you can ask for
is that they find
their way...

wonderful, littlewing!

KristieSue
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since 2003-01-31
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9 posted 2003-03-06 07:38 AM


very very sweet and something I'm sure he'll keep forever...


WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
10 posted 2003-03-06 07:39 AM


Very nice, enjoyed the read.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
11 posted 2003-03-06 11:06 AM


Sun . Kristie & White - TY so much - he will fly - I have about ummm 15 yrs to work on this sooo hehehe TY xxoo
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