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Open Poetry #25

Sometimes

Fauxreal
Junior Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 38

0 posted 2003-02-16 01:17 PM

Sometimes the quiet
Seems too loud
The crisp autumn breeze
So well endowed
With the sound...
Of change.
Sometimes the days
They seem too short
With nothing left
But night's report
Of how lonely winter's been-
And will be again.
Sometimes feels like all the time
When there's nothing left to say
No more delirious laughter
Or silly games to play
Sometimes feels like all the time
When youth has run away
taken fond memories with it-
And you know it's not coming back
Some other day...
When it's not raining.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-02-16 01:21 PM

I love the visions and wisdom found in these words. Very nicely done. Nice to read you

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-02-17 07:06 PM

Substantial...James

angsana
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 77

3 posted 2003-02-17 10:52 PM

Full of beautiful meanings...

angsana

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-17 10:54 PM

Very nicely done...wonderful imagery.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-17 11:49 PM

I love the expressed feelings in this piece.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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