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Ghia be a tier?
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Ghia be a tier? |
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prof.pishnu Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 21 |
Hello to all, and hi to you, a question of sorts please answer at will. Close your eyes, breath and see, look for your star upon the beach. The dreams are inside you, the passion in seas the love of a life time, lifting your seat. The love surges, rushes, infects the mind gives you a place untold, dont hide. Take her hand, let her see you live for her happiness, its what you'll be. Is this girl my angel? A ghia of sorts, that special someone healing all hurt. Could i be wrong and see a flirt? I dont know im not being me, answer this question and ill leave you be: Could this ghia be a tier, my final step towards insanity? [This message has been edited by prof.pishnu (03-05-2003 02:19 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Prof.Pishnu, No ripping apart. Loved the last lines. ~Welcome to Passions~ Look forward to reading more of your work. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting word play, Prof. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Yay!!! This is an excellent debut, sweet friend, always follow your heart and eventually you will know the real truth behind this kind of love! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Prof. this is a very good first post. I hope that you like it here and we can read more of your work. And.......  Ethel...garysgirl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
prof, It's a temporary possibility, LOL enjoyrd. |
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prof.pishnu Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 21 |
tyvm i never really thought of it as a word play although i guess it matches the description prefectly. Ty for helping me with the terms umm as for other poems lol i dunno, see what the next one turns out like and sey temp is definately the word lol although ahhh to stop time and to live in a moment with her ya u know wha i mean Ty all for the comments appreciated |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Prof.! Much enjoyed your first post.. I look forward to seeing more of your work.. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at the tiers concept. Welcome to Passions, I enjoyed this first read very much. No rips offered.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions prof. Very interesting first post. Have fun here. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
prof.pishnu----Welcome to Passions...I enjoyed your first post. |
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