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Open Poetry #25

embellished ramblings on It

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2003-03-05 12:34 PM

I have got to get It out but I cannot
these forms of characters only relieve
symptoms of madness constantly harangue
and prose is too long too tiresome to be tried
if I knew where it was a surgeon could operate
removing it once and for all, and if he refused
my own knife would suffice - anything but this
present state, a psychologist was too patient
listening to much and doing too little to help
It will not leave me and suddenly her face again
even though I tried to look elsewhere I cannot
Her face forever dances in the forefront and
in the faces of others I lose myself in Her
there was not a word, not a touch, not a single moment
together, only one look once when her eyes saw
deeper, farther in than any have before or since
and the song that just came on bears her name
damn them, damn It, damn me, damn all, for all

[This message has been edited by majnu (03-05-2003 12:48 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-05 02:19 AM

maj - Im sorry - but I do feel your pain - can relate to it more than you know - is lovely but yes extremely painful xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-03-05 02:47 AM

I feel this deeply

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2003-03-05 03:35 AM

Oh, yes...just one deep look, exchanged between mortals, can haunt our souls forever! I love your style, my friend!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (03-05-2003 03:36 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-03-05 12:44 PM

suddenly her face again
even though I tried to look elsewhere I cannot
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the song of her will find its own melody within the notes of you

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