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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-03-04 10:25 AM

I dream only of you, there is nothing beyond
No today.  No tomorrow. You have absorbed me
And the present moments seem but to dissolve...
By what power have you ravished my being?
By what strength am I so sweetly undone?
So it is that I journey, amazed
Between dark and light, and dark again
Seeking nothing but surrender
To the conquering power of Love.

Rf

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-03-04 10:31 AM

sweetly undone indeed...

nice work Robert

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-03-04 10:55 AM

An all consuming write and I like~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2003-03-04 10:58 AM

Robert...Passionately written and real!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-04 11:02 AM

Much enjoyed this Robert.
Love your style.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2003-03-04 11:24 AM

A wonderful write, thanks for sharing

Andrew

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-03-04 12:18 PM

nicely done

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2003-03-04 12:36 PM

Romance served the way I like it.

Beautiful writing.

Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-03-04 02:06 PM

Cpat quoted that which I was going to.

I love this.

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-03-04 02:28 PM

Robert - yes kind of in limbo - sweet so very sweet - lucid . . . xxoo

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

10 posted 2003-03-11 01:15 AM

Definately sounds as though you've been conquered Mssr. Frazier. Enjoy it.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-03-11 01:35 AM

beautiful indeed

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-03-11 06:58 AM

There are some dissolutions
that can be a marvelous happening...

well done, Robert. Thank you!

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

13 posted 2003-03-11 01:02 PM

Love is a very powerful thing, and you have expressed that very well.

Deb

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