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Staring Into Nothing
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Staring Into Nothing |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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I lie on the couch Thinking of all the dreams That will die I lie on the couch And all I can do Is cry I lie on the couch Wishing My parents Would give me a little Freedom I lie on the couch With tears rolling down My cheeks As I think of All that will change Once my parents Are home Once more Staring into nothing Is all I can do As I lie On the couch And cry Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I know the feeling, Julie. the Wind is invisible. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
very good write always treat others the way you want to be treated |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
That's the feeling I get when you're not on Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
but freedom will come and it will go...use it well when it comes...be brave sweet Julie  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, you describe your feelings very well. Hugs to you, friend... Ethel |
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