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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-03-03 01:56 PM



I Hear You…

My child, I've heard your whispers
   when you speak to the silence in your mind,
you ask me what I see in you
   if I see in you any reason or rhyme.

I see the great cheer in you
   and in you I see the delight,
as you go forth to the less fortunate
   and guide them through the night.

I see the shame in you
   for past transgressions wrought,
I see the forgiveness that you ask
   for you've realized what can't be bought.

I see in you, my child, the hurt
   over your stubborn pride,
and I would ask that you continue to pray
   and from me, never hide.

I see past pain, and continued hope
   I see troubled shadows creep within,
I see you raise your eyes to heaven
   I see the tremble in your chin.

In your eyes I see your grace,
   I see the tears well up in your eyes
every time you lift your face
   your love cannot be compromised.

I see a heart that bares its soul
   I see you impart great golden goals
even though yours have not been met
   you've prayed to me, I don't forget.

I see you try to do your best,
   and every day you wonder "oh my ~
did I slip, break a heart, or worse?"
   that's when I caught you on the fly.

O my child, continue on,
   do your best in my name
and continue please to pray to me,
   and I will keep you from shame.

Love, God

©KRJ
22 June 2000

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-03 02:04 PM


Very beautiful Karilea...
Such a calming uplifting feeling as I read.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

rkcraig
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2 posted 2003-03-03 02:09 PM


Another great one.  This one really makes me feel good that I went to church yesterday.  I love reading your work, I really do.  They make me feel great and cause me to think about so many things.
jellybeans
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3 posted 2003-03-03 02:11 PM


I know that this is pure and unto God, by the tears in my eyes....thank you sunshine  
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-03-03 03:15 PM


Karilea, so beautiful, and a keeper for me...
Thank you, sweet lady,
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-03-03 03:18 PM


...and I hear you, Dear One.

~ The beauty of your inner light glows on these pages...

Love & Light,

EA

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6 posted 2003-03-03 03:28 PM


Mom,I needed this....so full of wisdom
and his love....
very lovely lady...

Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2003-03-03 03:39 PM


Lovely.  Joyce
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2003-03-03 03:44 PM


very beautiful. You are at your best when you use rhyme...I  missed out so much on the story line that you and Cpat  have written that I can't know where to begin...
hugssss
M
*when are you going to stop fooling around with that pretty picture of yours???

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