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Open Poetry #19

A(void)(Dance)

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2002-02-27 09:37 AM

Since Gloom met my challenge...I'll share my other effort at this word play as well..( chuckling)
A(void)(Dance)

Spin
Toes on point
Of empty floor
Reflecting swirls
Of your desire

Spin
Empty arms formed
In imaginary hold
Of one no longer there

Spin
Time forward
  Time back
Memories to be made
Now spiral into mind

Spin
  Music now stopped
  yet spirit moves along

Spin
   Black holed here
     Unable to escape
       Pulling always
         Always in

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (02-27-2002 09:38 AM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-27 09:51 AM

Ron, I love this one....a keeper for sure....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-02-27 09:52 AM

CpatHair~

'Spin
Empty arms formed
In imaginary hold
Of one no longer there'

I felt circles in this piece~
Most admirable~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-02-27 10:01 AM

SEA: Thank you for the kind words... just playing with a single word title..and the varuious ways it can reflect different meanings. Gloom did a couple of versions off the same title and form..and did them well!

marge: Yes there are circles... and thank you for the nice words...always a pleasure when you drop in.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-02-27 10:19 AM

Cpat Hair,
Nice, enjoyed the read.

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