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Mysteria

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0 posted 2002-02-26 06:43 PM

Play Chopin's Prelude Op. 28, No. 7

~* I See You As Dawn Breaks *~
© Mysteria 01/2002

A wide blue sky adorns
This heavenly place I stand.
Morning breaks.
With eyes closed tight
I see you.

You pirouette through clouds
leaping in reckless disarray.
There is not a single sound,
except my heartbeat,
while I watch you dance.

I sense your soul flying free,
unleashed over the heads
of all mortal man,
as I meld with psychic tremors
to feel you with me, in me.

Suddenly, you’re there.
Such tender warmth.
I feel your loving touch,
see your smile,
that was always your way.

As dawn breaks
Beyond the darkened
mountain at my back,
I close my eyes, and
I will always see you dance.

~*~

art: from a card I received (author unknown)
if you know who did this please let me know
and I will give them full credit, thank you.

midi from: Music for Piano http://frontpage.uk.digiserve.com/musicforpianos/balletmusic.htm

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-26-2002 09:42 PM).]

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2002-02-26 06:46 PM

tissue warning needed with this one! oh the love just pours from your words....I love this

Mistletoe Angel

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2 posted 2002-02-26 07:07 PM

(smiles) God Bless the person who sent you that gorgeous card, sweet friend, just feeling the smile of a loved one is a beautiful gift to have and I am so blessed of this friendship you weave in these magical words! (wipes tears) This made me cry a little, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May loe and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-26 07:37 PM

Very nice Mysteria, I enjoyed this. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-26 07:42 PM

Thanks for the tissue warning Susan, but it came a little too late, as I had already read this when I came to your reply.
Wonderful Sharon....I now can picture Willow dancing....and at times I am sure I am not the only one who feels as though they know her through you. Lovely write dear poetess.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Martie

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5 posted 2002-02-26 08:02 PM

Sharon

A sigh and tear from this knowing heart...this was beautifully done!

Poet deVine

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6 posted 2002-02-26 08:07 PM

Lovely....just lovely. Isn't it odd that so many emotions can be tapped with a good poem, a lovely graphic and some Chopin?

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-02-26 09:29 PM

Mysteria - you are one excellent poet. Your presentations are exquistit. And your poems also...

BC

Tracey
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8 posted 2002-02-26 09:38 PM

Some people are just permanently etched into our hearts aren’t they?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mysteria

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9 posted 2002-02-26 09:41 PM

You are all so very kind in your comments and support, and as you can see I have now located and will use a "tissue alert" from now on. Thanks again my friends.

Honeybee
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10 posted 2002-02-27 02:50 PM

Sharon, this is beautiful and so moving. It has already been an emotional day for me and this touched me even more. Willow sure inspires beauties and sorrow from your pen. I'm sure she truly does dance for you in heaven. Your poem also makes me think of my Grandma

Hugs~
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Startime
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11 posted 2002-02-27 02:59 PM

Oh gosh...did I ever need the tissue alert...but then one way or another with your work I always do...You seem to touch the heart and soul in so many ways...Magnificent...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nightshade

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just out of reach

12 posted 2002-02-27 03:08 PM

Just lovely...lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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13 posted 2002-02-27 03:38 PM

Yes dear, Willow shall always be with you, for as you can see, she has now given song to your wings...

Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-02-27 03:43 PM

I think I needed the entire box of those tissues, Mysteria...that was very beautiful...but also very sad.

thanks for sharing

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mysteria

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15 posted 2002-02-27 05:46 PM

You're are wonderful you know that? Funny but I don't need the tissues anymore I actually smile whenever she is around, and she is around. Thanks again for all your wonderful comments and for always reading these.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

Suetang
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16 posted 2002-02-28 09:41 PM

Hello Sharon

How well I could relate to this one...beautiful.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Mysteria

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17 posted 2002-02-28 09:48 PM

Sue, I bet you do, for they are "there", you just have to see them and feel them. Take care honey.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

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18 posted 2002-03-01 04:03 AM

*You pirouette through clouds
leaping in reckless disarray.
There is not a single sound,
except my heartbeat,
while I watch you dance.*
What a beautiful image this gives of our loved ones who have died.

-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Rick
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19 posted 2002-03-01 04:44 AM

Dear Mysteria
Enjoyed the read, which inspired a few lines as well.
Sincerely Rick

As there she stood above the earth
She looked upon us all
Smiling with her inner grace
The look of kindness on her face
Wings of flight and dancing feet
All the words of song so sweat
As dawn it came to fall

Mysteria

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20 posted 2002-03-01 01:09 PM

Rebekah ~ So glad you liked this.

Rick ~ How very beautiful and I have taken your words, printed them, and added them into a book I keep close to my heart, thank you so very much for starting my day off with a smile.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

21 posted 2002-03-02 04:47 AM

Mysteria-
This is a very beautiful and touching piece.
Wonderfully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Nan

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22 posted 2002-03-02 07:01 PM

Dancing among the stars... Simply wonderful..

Mysteria

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23 posted 2002-03-02 08:00 PM

Thank you dear friends, I appreciate your comments.

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