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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-02-26 05:29 PM



Puffed peacock preening
perfect postured panoply--
penultimate pride.




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1 posted 2002-02-26 05:33 PM



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2 posted 2002-02-26 08:01 PM


perfectly presented poem
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3 posted 2002-02-26 08:04 PM


passionately penned punkin!
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4 posted 2002-02-26 08:17 PM


Privately perplexed person??


*I couldn't find Pasquinade in my Scrabble dictionary*

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So that you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2002-02-26 08:22 PM


Perfectly prepared poem
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6 posted 2002-02-26 10:05 PM


Perfect, poetic princess. (hey I got J for this challenge. what the heck am I gonna do with that??)

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7 posted 2002-02-27 03:55 AM


perfectly penned,
pity me I got G
Keth

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8 posted 2002-02-27 01:09 PM


Pretty poem Poet ....*supergrin*

Charisma

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9 posted 2002-02-27 01:26 PM


You cheated.  I'm tellin.  Not sure who, but I'm tellin.  
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10 posted 2002-02-27 01:47 PM


Pleasurably passionately perfectionate!!!



YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo wonderful, sweet friend, I too need to try the alliteration challenge! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful vision of a peacock of pride, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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11 posted 2002-02-27 04:22 PM


pleasingly perfect!!  

I see that you broke out the dictionary for this one . . . good!!!

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serenity blaze
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12 posted 2002-02-27 04:29 PM


Sven...glad you saw the humor here. I only checked the dictionary for the title tho, and that was to make sure of the spelling. But laughing at the "break out" the dictionary, I'm sure the family wishes I would pick up some of my reference books, I just looked around and counted 7 that are currently scattered about my coffeetable (which is actually boxes of books covered with an old altar cloth)

so we're looking for a house with lots of bookshelves!   Had fun with this one, but let me know if you need the longer poem (which did require the dictionary by the way!) Had fun!

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13 posted 2002-02-28 04:48 PM


LOL...this is a very well done consonance haiku. I like the natural imagery, as well as the double entendre.


serenity blaze
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14 posted 2002-02-28 08:37 PM


came back to wink, and add to Tracey--J?

"just jokingly joust,
justifying joker's jubilee'"



words is fun. heh heh.

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