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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-02-25 10:22 AM



I was sitting at the computer
and my husband walked in the door
He was holding his suits
from the cleaners
as he hung them in the closet
i heard him laughing

I said.."Why are you laughing"

He said "The man in the cleaners
asked me if i was a mortician"

"A mortician...Why?
I could see if your suits were black
but they are blue and gray"

He said "Now I understand why he asked me"

Pinned to the top suit were memorials
from three  funerals my husband
had attended.

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce


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1 posted 2002-02-25 10:24 AM


HAHAHA Victoria, thank you so much for the laugh, It is the first laugh all weekend and it is wonderful. great story. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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2 posted 2002-02-25 11:08 AM


Been there.... cute tale, with a tinge of the sad reality....

nicely done!

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3 posted 2002-02-25 11:09 AM


LOL!  Thanks for the laugh, Victoria.

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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4 posted 2002-02-25 06:35 PM


thank you floria pat and michael..im glad i could make you laugh ha..
was sort of a funny thing to happen to him..

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5 posted 2002-02-25 06:44 PM




(giggles) Awwwwwwww, this is kind of sad but also shines with clean funny humor! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful creative poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-26 08:25 AM


Ha, that was a good one. Life is so weird, when you think about it too long.
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-02-26 08:33 AM


thank you Noah..

thank you sandra..yes it certainly is ha..hugs

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8 posted 2002-02-26 10:49 AM


More funerals than weddings I attend
not baptisms but the rites where this life ends
point of view's we're upright and attend
such service and these words you kindly penned

[This message has been edited by RSWells (02-26-2002 02:54 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-02-26 12:34 PM


~V~

You just have that nack for bringing humor aboard.....Neat story, fun write... HUGS


Lauren~


Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-26-2002 12:34 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-02-26 06:49 PM


thank you richard and lauren..for peeking in today..nice to hear from you both..hugs

              ~Vic

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