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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2002-02-25 02:15 AM

Write me a poem ~
about the ocean,
about rain
tell of loving
heart's given in vain
Write me a poem ~
about a secret fantasy
something you've wished for
the way life should be
Write me a poem ~
about people who love too much
paint their burning need
for that wondrous touch
Write me a poem ~
give my soul a shake
make me believe
you feel my heart's ache
Write me a poem ~
imagined or real
give me your words.....
make me feel

~SEA~

*for Michael Auguste*

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

1 posted 2002-02-25 02:29 AM

Write a poem,
but not just for me.
Paint us portrait,
a glimpse of the Sea.

Write a poem,
each one you share.
Lifts me right up
and carries me there.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2002-02-25 02:32 AM

Gee, you had me convinced to do it but then I saw it wasn't for me

I'm so disappointed!!

SEA

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3 posted 2002-02-25 02:32 AM

Lucie....

SEA

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4 posted 2002-02-25 02:33 AM

Deer!!! you just posted one for Rose Petal! I'd say we could call it even????

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-25 08:16 AM

YAY!!! (smiles) Awwwwwww, I'm so happy Michael requested this lovely poem of yours, this is a timeless beauty and for you and all my wonderful friends here I will forever write to make you smile and cry and imagine just as I know you always will! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2002-02-25 08:18 AM

Stay tuned...

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-25 08:57 AM

I can't wait for the answer poem..thanks for writing this poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-02-25 09:02 AM

Sea,
Wonderful write, I'm sure you will get a few answers from this.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-02-25 09:31 AM

I was reading poems in his site yesterday..some made me cry..a lovely writer he is..nicely done Sea..

~Victoria~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2002-02-25 09:42 AM

Susan, I wouldn't think that too many people are able to wake up on a Monday morning with a smile as big as the one I have on my face at this moment.

Thank you, precious. I love you dearly. You shall have your poem. (((hugs)))

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Spirit Of Twilight
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since 2002-01-11

Posts 116
India

11 posted 2002-02-25 01:34 PM

Susan,
I simply loved your beautiful poem.
Thanks for sharing!Do keep writing!
Neha

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

12 posted 2002-02-25 02:07 PM

I too, found myself writing the words as I read your plea. Then I got to that last note...really killed the moment, ya know? LOL

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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California

13 posted 2002-02-25 03:01 PM

Wow - What a beatiful little piece here. Everything that a poem should be...

Michael

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

14 posted 2002-02-25 03:17 PM

Circe, may I call you that too? Hi there this is utterly utterly spectacular. The flow the construction the rhythm all combine to make this truly excellent.

You have written this beautifully, this has the flow of water over glass, as smooth as silk. YOU really are an exceptional writer. And this is an exceptional poem definitely a superbly crafted delight. This really is something special

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-02-25 03:25 PM

Add me to the list of the disappointed

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

16 posted 2002-02-25 03:29 PM

Loved the beauty in your simple plea~
Very nice as always~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

17 posted 2002-02-25 03:37 PM

hey now, who says you can't write me a poem Cowboy ???? I would love one from you!!!!

and Interloper, you already know better than that

Krissy, Mushy's little one, how sweet you are, of course you can call me Circe

thank you all very much for reading....
Michael inspired this poem......he is an awesome friend

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

18 posted 2002-02-25 03:37 PM

What words can find
their way from paper
to touch with fingered
lacey carress
the heart of one
so dear?

Lovely write SEA.... lovely indeed

SEA

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19 posted 2002-02-25 03:39 PM

thank you Ron

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

20 posted 2002-02-25 06:38 PM

Circe thank you again for this delight and still mum hasn’t got to it, There mum I beat you again

As for little one I’m not a babe as such even if mum calls me that, I’m 29yrs old, but you can call me little if you like. (It’ll probably be the last time anyone will called me that)

This really is a lovely poem, I like it a lot

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Sunshine

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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

21 posted 2002-02-25 09:12 PM

What a lovely gift you've given! I am sure he was blown away by this one!

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