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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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So many things you have said to me Things that really did hurt you see There were times I did forgive you My love for you was always true The days they always come and go Love for me you never do show I sit here waiting for you every day But it is always the same old way Careless comments is all you give With you it is so hard to live You treat me like I'm just a toy Someone just for you to enjoy I am overcome with so much shame My feelings of love are not the same By Sue 2-21-02 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dear one, giving love is nothing to feel shame for...You gave from your heart...and I hurt to know that you are not receiving the same love you so willingly give...**big big hugs**  Take care, dear one, someone more deserving will come along. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, I know this feeling ever so much, to share love unconditionally is the most gorgeous blessing of all and you always share love with all your heart, it's only that that person you gave it too didn't appreciate you! (kiss on cheek) Soon your love will touch so many and you will always find much joy from those who understand you, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSue~ You've done a WONDERFUL piece with the inspiration phrase~ You're growing in your poetry sweetie~ Big *HUGS* to you~ Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Emotional piece, Sue. Nicely done. Sandra |
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