Voices Meshing - a duet with the Flower Girl

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Open Poetry #19

Voices Meshing - a duet with the Flower Girl

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-02-24 01:44 PM

She stands, hearing me, on the other side of the Rockies
                     Her voice travels in song waves, with no slip of travail
E'en when my wailing takes me to my knees
                     Listening is to hear the sun through the gale

And northern wind, blow me ever away
                     Such sweet depth of thought is not constrained
For only one can hear what this heart would say
                     Into the mind like piano's fingered refrain

And the echo lies within the valley's core
                   The cry and laughter fly with harmonies wings
That I would sing this song of you, forevermore
                   Then like listening wind I have learned how to sing

My gratitude to our Flower Girl, Martie, whom in duet, makes us all fly...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-24-2002 02:20 PM).]

Martie

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1 posted 2002-02-24 01:51 PM

Karilea

Thank you for singing with me today...It was so much fun!

Mistletoe Angel

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2 posted 2002-02-24 01:51 PM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love this one, sweet friends, this has an outstanding voice! I could envision you both standing on two mountain peaks on both sides of the Continental Divide and the echo of friendship was only growing between you through every word in this Muse! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friends, BRAVO!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Karilea and Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-24-2002 01:52 PM).]

amusemi
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3 posted 2002-02-24 01:55 PM

Cool write!!!

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-02-24 03:02 PM

And northern wind, blow me ever away
Such sweet depth of thought is not constrained
For only one can hear what this heart would say
Into the mind like piano's fingered refrain

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this is the what the wind sings to us when of the Sun and the Sky dance.

Auguste

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5 posted 2002-02-24 05:26 PM

Okay, you two get a WOW! I don't often give out one of those. LOL!

You write wonderfully together.

me

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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