Swan Smooch (Inspired by Magicmystery)

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-02-24 01:25 PM

I was inspired to write this poem after reading Sherry's wonderful poem "As I Am" and seeing that gorgeous image she added, and I got this beautiful dream in my head...

Swan Smooch
By: Noah Eaton
2/24/02

Two swans rock upon the crystal shore
Phantoms of lovers dreams conjoining reality
Feverfew coronets enshrouding serpentine desires
Where the swans of lovers hearts finally meet

Sparrow grass strums with the crickets bayou blues
Moonlight scatters across the water with angel ambrosia
Falling stars leap like gazelles across the night sky
The passion of the evening begins with a kiss of sangria

The swans of lovers hearts cuddle, beak to beak
Slender necks forming the shape of a heart magically
This sweet kiss tying the knot of a forever's promise
A vow of eternal courtship, enlaced in ribbons of thanksgiving

One man, one woman, find true love this magical moment
Two lovebirds of God, sailing away into happiness
Feathered by the moonlight, ruffled in tears of angels
Receiving those extra feathers to see loves eternal glimpse...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-24-2002 01:27 PM).]

PearlsB4Swine
Member

since 2002-02-01

Posts 130
where the heart finds me

1 posted 2002-02-24 02:22 PM

quote:
One man, one woman, find true love this magical moment
Two lovebirds of God, sailing away into happiness

And that my friend, is the key to it all...well said!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-02-24 02:25 PM

ohhhh my gosh, this is so pretty!
I'm glad to see you being inspired by magicmystery, another fine poet indeed!
(hugs) Keep these beauties coming

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

3 posted 2002-02-24 05:11 PM

Noah hi there, this is so pretty and so visual, mum (Mushy) said you were an excellent writer and you are, my mum is never wrong about things like that. Other things in abundance yes, but never about quality writing.

I wish you and your Joanna joy, I have watched your romance grow and I really do think you are both fine poets.

You’re wrong you know Noah, I never write anything, I simply love to read, so there won’t be any poems inflicted on your eyes from me. Honestly you would all say now that is not just bad poetry but it is dire poetry. The type of writing that needs to be mercifully put to death, the type that euthanasia was invented for. If my writing were a person it would be shot on sight and the marksman who did the dirty deed would become a national hero. So I promise no poems from me.

This however is excellent poetry

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2002-02-24 05:49 PM

~~~{{{sigh}}}~~~ Thank you Noah.... this means alot to me.... and I love your poem.... tis a work of art...

by the way... did you know that it was quite by coincidence that I found an ice sculpture of swans for my picture.. to use them.... Swans mate for life..
Just as Man and Wife.

Beautiful write sweetie!!!

Love, Light and Peace,

Your friend and fan,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (02-24-2002 05:50 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-02-24 06:14 PM

Noah...this is gorgeous...now I have to find Sherry's poem. I've been away for a few days...and now I'm playing catchup.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-24 06:42 PM

Noah sweetie! Your writing just gets better and better and this one I absolutely love!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-25 09:27 AM

"One man, one woman, find true love this magical moment
Two lovebirds of God, sailing away into happiness"

Oh my these are most beautiful words Noah, A beautifully written poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Spirit Of Twilight
Member

since 2002-01-11

Posts 116
India

8 posted 2002-02-25 02:15 PM

Noah,
This is precious...much more beautiful than what the eyes would have seen in reality than imagined by your poem!Thanks for sharing it!
Neha

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-02-25 05:11 PM

Noah~

Oh wow you have done it, this is a grand write, and a lovely dream....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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