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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-02-24 11:17 AM



“DREAM WANDERING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Eyes closed, just drifting,
off somewhere seeing visions…
To discover thoughts,
perhaps only, affirmations…

Searching through my mind,
to find you, no longer wander…
Wanting you, warmth of closeness,
together we’ll be, not apart…

Dream wandering what I do,
join me there, take my hand…
We’ll know each other close,
sharing passions, in my dreamland…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-24 11:36 AM




(smiles) Such innocent beauty flows from your heart, sweet friend, I too love to dream of my dream girl all the time and I just wish I could fall into her arms in reality! (big huggggsssss) May all your dreams come true with love close to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-24 11:40 AM


Bill - this one is soft and lovely. I enjoyed it's flow. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2002-02-24 12:06 PM



In brevity...more...

well done, Sir...

amusemi
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4 posted 2002-02-24 02:31 PM


I don't know how you do it...You write such aching pain from love and yet you still ring the bell of hope in the next piece.  If it comes in a pill, I'd like some!!!!!

  Great write!

Krissy
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5 posted 2002-02-24 05:00 PM


Bill hi there this is another wonderful piece of writing, full of dreams and wishes, I like this it shines bright with hope. Well done Bill well done  


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-02-24 05:13 PM


I really enjoyed this dream, Bill...
It was very well written and full of tenderness.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-02-24 08:16 PM


*sigh* Now this is my kind of dream wandering...Magnificent writing, Bill...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2002-02-24 08:40 PM


Dream wandering..what a great phrase. I like it almost as well as romance mountain.
Sandra

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9 posted 2002-02-24 10:02 PM


Another beautiful poem, Bill.  Our dreams are the place where we find the passion that we wish to pursue.  Liked this one very much.

***Ivy Rose

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10 posted 2002-02-24 10:06 PM


Bill
I enjoyed this so much I shared it with my sweetie. Every night as we say goodnight (off the computer) we tell each other we will meet the other there (in dreams).. This was so close to special to me.. Thanks for sharing


Jen

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11 posted 2002-02-25 12:45 PM


Very lovely poem, and it is through dreams we know what our heart's reality is.

~* Imagination is more important than knowledge *~

Einstein


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12 posted 2002-02-25 09:18 AM


Bill, what a lovely thought, "dream wandering"  lovely indeed. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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