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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Naked Access she had asked him for a rose a symbol for love I suppose to be placed on her door if he loved her anymore when she got there she found it bare "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-24-2002 02:43 PM).] |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
I am undressed by this feeling of poem you write. It is simple in its power. Contabo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow, simple and poetic but with no justice. Nice write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I have lots of roses to spare for those in need ... Sad, but then again beautiful writing ~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Sad, but touching write.I have many roses for a friend in need. Peaches |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is very sad.... your too good at thease sad writes... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear lady you have set me back in my chair yet again. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so sad but wonderfully written, sweet friend, my heart goes out to her and I hope soon she will be showered with bouquests of roses by true love! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!    May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
That'd be me!! Painted to a T Ask for love Fail miserably! Very touching piece...you do this so well!!!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I too have looked for a sign..unfortunately the sign I get is blank...do not enter... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Wow. It didn't take very many words for you to say volumes with this one. Effective. Nan |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
But...but...what she didn't know is that the little kid next door saw it laying there, picked it up and took it home to his mommy... OOPs...sorry! Couldn't help myself. Really very pretty...so much said in so little and very efficiently too. Loved this... jwesley |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely woman with an empty rose such an image to imagine I will not..will close my eyes and see the petals full of blush well done ms |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens that way sometimes |
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