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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-14 11:30 PM


(This is for you...my love)

Be My Valentine
By: Noah Eaton
2/14/02

Be my valentine
My sweetheart
My lips softly sigh
As you step into my heart from afar

My heart beckons upon the wild blue yonder for you
I want to hold your hand as I walk with you across lifes golden bridge
On loves doves flight, I will hold you dear and true
Touching each others heart as we float above the rainbow ridge

My heart melts hearing your sweet voice
It's amazing how you leave me breathless in complete joy
Under the starry skies shining light bestrewed in turquoise
Kiss me, my valentine, may our hearts sing in rejoice

I dream I'm dancing with you in the summer rain on the mountainside
Soft cotton raindrops touching us, waterfalls of angel kisses showering our souls
Clangors of windchimes sighing upon the vale as you smile in delight
I hold you in my arms, kissing your soft candy lips
As a bevy of turtle doves float above us
Weaving a love forever to behold

Oh sweetie, you sound more beautiful than a choir of angels
You are the most beautiful girl I could ever lay my eyes upon, you are so lovely
You are my dream come true, your heart shimmers with gold
Hear my words, as your beauty makes my lips swim in happiness

Oh Joanna...
I knew I loved you when you first stepped into my life
Oh Joanna...
Will you be my valentine?

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-14-2002 11:30 PM).]

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Suetang
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1 posted 2002-02-14 11:33 PM


Hello Noah

Such a stunning dedication for your lady love Joanna.  She is such a lucky girl to have so many special things written especially for her.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2002-02-14 11:40 PM


If I was in colorado, you wouldnt have to ask me that question twice
This is very pretty. I hope u have a nice valentines day

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3 posted 2002-02-14 11:46 PM


Noah - Truly a beautiful and heartfelt write for the lady that you love.  Nicely done.

Dave

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4 posted 2002-02-15 12:27 PM


Oh boy are you going to get those kisses on the cheek, very romantic poem Noah.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.  
Let the reader catch their own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~


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5 posted 2002-02-15 01:00 AM


Noah; Hello to you and Happy Valentine's Day.  I trust Joanna will be pleased with this beautiful Valentine poem you have penned for her.  Wanda
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6 posted 2002-02-15 10:26 AM


I hope she says yes... for you deserve a life filled with happiness. *S*
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7 posted 2002-02-15 10:55 AM


I certainly hope she says yes dear soul...for who could say no to that ?
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8 posted 2002-02-15 10:55 AM


You're a wonderful romantic, Noah... I hope your Valentine's Day was a huge success..
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