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Open Poetry #19

hey you! (senryu)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2002-02-23 11:55 PM

you staple to me;
then punch holes all over me
What games do you play?

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-24 12:02 PM

I patch up the holes
And make you as good as new
Let's play a new game

theres my senryu response! Hope u like it

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2002-02-24 12:02 PM

This is very thought provoking.One could come up with a wide array of answers.Short but to the point.
Peaches

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-24 12:06 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this senryu and the one Joanna made a reply to, these are wonderful! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2002-02-24 05:49 AM

thank you RosePetal for your creative response..in fact, i wish i thought of coming up with a follow-up to this senryu myself...

so what game do you wish to play??

peaches, i like thought-provoking poems myself and thanks for thinking this is one of them..

Noah, thanks for reading

p/s: perhaps i will come up with a follow-up too..thanks for the idea, RosePetal!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2002-02-24 05:55 PM

hello again

I wanna play whatever you wanna play

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-24-2002 05:56 PM).]

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