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Open Poetry #19
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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-02-23 10:08 PM



am going to spiral this poem
because it’s a reflection of my life
and with each enjambment
and trochaic meter
you will understand
the shaky pattern
the instability
the walking-
working-
living-
dying
of my
day-to-day
die-to-die
sing song self
do you feel ashamed
paying five cents for a peep?


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (02-23-2002 10:37 PM).]

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pandora
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 184

1 posted 2002-02-23 10:35 PM


clever, effective.....

and no, i don't

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2002-02-23 10:38 PM


You should raise the going rate!!  And that's my ten cents....


Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-02-24 06:36 PM



Nope.
When
did
you
start
charging?

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