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kaile
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0 posted 2002-02-22 10:21 PM


my heart was sliced open
as I watched him fumble

don't brand me a weirdo
but I kinda relished the pain~

I finally had the capacity
to care for someone else


© Copyright 2002 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-23 03:02 AM


There is a wry irony to this that I just adore--we do see ourselves in unexpected mirrors at times and it takes honest self assessment to acknowledge and a healthy dose of humility to smile about it too!

Enjoyed!

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2 posted 2002-02-23 03:43 AM


Never would I ever call you a weirdo! This is just more proof to me of what I already knew about you. You are a wonderful sensitive caring soul, and a good writer too.
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3 posted 2002-02-23 10:53 AM


ouch!   can you put this kind of stuff on here, this is almost brutal!

marya

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4 posted 2002-02-23 11:15 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwww, never say that, you are not a weirdo; you are a very loving and compassionate person who reaches out to all with comfort and love for everyone! (sigh) We all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

kaile
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5 posted 2002-02-23 11:40 PM


thank you serenity for your comment...you just gave me additional insight into my musing...

your comments are flattering though..i am not sure whether i am honest and humble but well, these are ideals that we can all aim for, right?

midnitesun and Noah, awww, you duo make me blush!

welcome marya to the blue pages...i hope you will have fun here...your comment made me chuckle...but then if one doesn't try to be brutually honest with himself, then it will be rather tragic, ya??

thanx all


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6 posted 2002-02-24 11:48 AM


i'm liking this....



hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"it may be absurd..but dont be naive..even heros have the right to bleed" john ondrosic?

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7 posted 2002-02-24 12:44 PM


This was a very good writing. Clever and original. Plus, I enjoyed the subject matter.
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