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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Wild Once before he'd seen her tracks on hot pavement, wet and steamy. Here, an otter from the creek had stretched full length and privatized a public road despite some traffic. What made her pause and court such risk upon a surface foreign to the forest. Perhaps she liked against her teats the sucking feel of stone aggregate, or errant gravel edged like teeth. He closed his eyes and saw her suit, sleek and shining in the sun, streaming water. He looked again and saw the heat induce a sleep, hot and restive, burning red beneath her eyelids; responding to the playful splash, a rainbow shape as her back arched rolling over on one hip, her weight sinking into the pool-side concrete. RMW |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A welcome warm image on a cold, dreary day! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thank you, Duncan. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob What an interesting look through your eyes. I would love to have seen this, and have now thanks to you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bob. . . as always, you never cease to amaze me with your unique view of the world. . . good to see you again Sir. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Martie and Sven...thank you for taking a moment. Bob |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes... nicely done Bob... always enjoy the way you let the words unfold the image... A pleasure to read |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am the otter...or at least, you made me feel as if I could be... and that, Sir, is writing! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is good...very good...thank you.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Ooohhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous natural visions you create and the emotions you express in your words! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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