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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-02-22 11:32 AM


Our Love
AMK
2/22/02

As the time draws closer
For us to see one another
I realise even stronger
For me there is no other

You are the love in my heart
You are the light in my eyes
The reason I'm who I am
Is because you chased away my rainy skies

You hold my hand when I need you
You wipe away the tears from my face
Everyday you show me how much you love me
With your usual beauty and never ending grace

You are my friend and lover
And for me you are my only one
We are as one now
Loving and living, our life has begun

Everyday with you is an adventure
That fills me with joy and love
As I turn my eyes to the heavens
Thanking our sweet God above

Forever I want to be with you
These words of love I say are true
I will love you forever my sweet darling
A love this strong, I've never knew

I close my eyes at night
Wondering where I'd be without you
And suddenly it makes me feel lost
My smiling face suddenly looking blue

Then the phone rings
And I hear your sweet voice once again
I know that no matter what happens in life
With your love my heart can mend

Today I bought you something
I'm kinda nervous to ask you, frankly I'm a mess
I just hope that when I propose to you when the time is right
In your loving voice I adore, you answer with a yes.

J I LOVE YOU. NOW AND ALWAYS!



© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-22 11:58 AM


"Then the phone rings
And I hear your sweet voice once again
I know that no matter what happens in life
With your love my heart can mend

Today I bought you something
I'm kinda nervous to ask you, frankly I'm a mess
I just hope that when I propose to you when the time is right
In your loving voice I adore, you answer with a yes.

J I LOVE YOU. NOW AND ALWAYS!"




YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, I'M SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU AGAIN, I'VE MISSED YOU AND YOUR LOVELY WORDS SO MUCH!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) We're all so happy for you, sweet friend, may the joy of true love forever sing in your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-22 01:00 PM


Amy my darling lil sis of my heart Oh my goodness this is such an excellent piece of writing. I can’t pick out just one line it is all absolutely spot on. The beauty held in this is amazing, I really do wish I’d written this, it all sooooooo wonderfully beautiful.

YOU are an excellent writer

Two hearts united in glorious love
Pure and wonderful, the gift of above
No fear can hold you bound in night
Your love shines a loving light
Walk on in love set your heart free
Love looks so fabulous on you Amy

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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3 posted 2002-02-22 02:19 PM


Hi Amy! It's good to see you so happy!
This is a great poem

rosepetals25
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4 posted 2002-02-22 02:29 PM


Amy,


    Ohh this is just beautiful!!!!  I love this! You read my mind about my Dave this fits so perfectly. I'm sending him over here to stop in and read Just wonderful *tucks this one in her library*

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Sven
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5 posted 2002-02-22 02:31 PM


this is wonderful. . .

you'll let us know??  

good to see you again my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
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6 posted 2002-02-22 02:37 PM


That's love.
SEA
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with you
7 posted 2002-02-22 04:11 PM


AMY!!!!

I have missed reading you!! Sounds like very exciting times yes, please, let us know how it goes!!!!

ParisGrl
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8 posted 2002-02-22 05:31 PM


Amy,

Congratulations!  I wish you the best.

Take Care,
Laura

Krissy
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9 posted 2002-02-22 06:15 PM


Hi there Amy it’s Krissy, I’ve wanted to reply for ages to your writing so mum (Marsha) has let me become a member. You needn’t worry I don’t write poetry, so I won’t be putting my work here. I haven’t got any. grin

Anyway this is really beautiful love, absolutely beautiful, as is the love you share with your true love. Thank you for giving me a warm glow

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

Obviously I have to use my mum's computer so that's why my writing is this nice shade of violet, I didn't want anyone to confuse us.

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Aimster
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10 posted 2002-02-22 08:23 PM


Thank you all for your warm replies
and heartfelt words...they mean the
world to me. Yes I have finally found
the love of my life and woman of my
dreams, and of course couldn't wait
to share her and the love we share
with all of you my family away from
well my family LOL. Glad that you all
seem to be doing well and im also glad
to be reading and posting again. i will
keep you all informed of her answer and
how things progress. cross your fingers!
take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Kethry
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11 posted 2002-02-22 09:54 PM


Amy,
I'm glad to hear you are happy again and I'm thrilled that you are back to post.
Congratulations!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Enchantress
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12 posted 2002-02-22 10:00 PM


Amy!  So wonderful to see you back and happy too!  You and your writing have been missed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

CocoBaci
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13 posted 2002-02-22 10:07 PM


AMY, I'm sooooooo tickled pink2read this sweetest of sweet poem you write for your darling 'J'...
Gosh sweetie I'm soooooooo happy4u both and wish you much happiness2day and always...
Hugs2uDearPoetFriend
*~coco~*

SEA
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with you
14 posted 2002-02-22 10:15 PM


crossing fingers and toes good luck sweetie!!!!
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