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rwood
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0 posted 2002-02-22 08:00 AM



I ached
from a silly mistake
where lips spoke
before my words
were tasted

Then the bitter reward
of having nothing
but hunger for love
and a terrible thirst
for spirit soothing

I wanted to feel 10 feet tall
and wound up feeling so small
as if nothing was left
but a slight smear of who I was

I realized that I am
only faintly there
without your arms
making me real

even as my arms were folded up
as I walked away
pouting like a child
who didn’t get her way

too stubborn to see
how I made my own cage
and rattled it foolishly

then a voice gifted me
saying that the one that heals
is the one that reveals love

to go to the place where we meet
and offer there, my heart

it didn’t matter who was right
or wrong
healing was the key

In a matter of seconds
the eternity of pain
slipped away
I suppose I could take the credit

but it was Love’s hand
that touched
as real as the Day
seeping sideways through the blinds

My hand was just an instrument
that pulled hard the cord
as I stood bare in ready


© Copyright 2002 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-22 08:08 AM


speechless.........dear somy~

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-02-22 08:28 AM


what the heart whispers
is the gift

so pleased you saw
your gift of healing
so few do

lovely work ms wood



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3 posted 2002-02-22 08:52 AM


yes..we should listen to those voices...

as usual...very nicely done...


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4 posted 2002-02-22 09:35 AM


Reg,
Oh my...incredible. How do you do that?

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2002-02-22 09:43 AM


I ached
from a silly mistake
where lips spoke
before my words
were tasted

Then the bitter reward
of having nothing
but hunger for love
and a terrible thirst
for spirit soothing
==============================

what clever analogies and metaphors these are...and deep and layered if one reads betwen the lines....
from a poets hands ... comes humility ....
from loves hand comes forgiveness.
beautiful write of honesty poetess Regina
groovy to see you rhyme too

"Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power.  
We have guided missiles and misguided men."

MLK

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6 posted 2002-02-22 10:06 AM


No doubt you are easy to forgive. Enjoyed
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-02-22 10:11 AM


rwood - beautiful your write. I love these words, they are so true.. Loved the others too, but these struck me...

it didn’t matter who was right
or wrong
healing was the key

BC

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8 posted 2002-02-22 11:10 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may Loves Hand forever caress your heart and fill you with joy for eternity! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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9 posted 2002-02-22 11:25 AM


Your heart speaks with this poem rwood. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-02-22 11:31 AM


Rwood,
A very nice write, enjoyed.

Martie
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11 posted 2002-02-22 11:59 AM


Regina

A deep and truth filled writing, and wisdom laced.  I love the way you have with words!

Apachecat906
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12 posted 2002-02-22 12:30 PM


Hi Regina

I loved the last stanza the best
=====
but it was Love’s hand
that touched
as real as the Day
seeping sideways through the blinds

My hand was just an instrument
that pulled hard the cord
as I stood bare in ready
=======

What a lovely image.  And you are so right, do you know?  Sometimes the healing is so hard though...but you make it sound so gentle.  

Much to think on in here.  

Take care, Carrie



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13 posted 2002-02-22 02:56 PM


wonderful words. . . and a lesson. . .

superbly done Regina. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Aimster
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14 posted 2002-02-22 04:11 PM


Regina,


this was such a powerful write
with many interpretations woven
between the lines. as always your
work fascinates me and leaves me
wanting to read more! its been a while
since ive been here...but i clearly
remember the impression your work had
on me. this was no exception.

take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Suetang
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15 posted 2002-02-22 04:25 PM


Hello Regina

You are such a master at your craft and you always leave me in awe at the beauty of your words.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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16 posted 2002-02-22 07:05 PM


Beautiful. Love's hand touches all, if we let it.
Sandra

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17 posted 2002-02-22 07:09 PM



Reading you is being entertained in so many ways...thank you for being a part of Passions!

rwood
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18 posted 2002-02-22 07:57 PM


Donna: Thank you for being such a gentle spirit. Light as a feather..dear somy~

Dark: Yes..heart whispers..I am so very thankful for that special voice. It helped me be what I needed to be. Thank You.

Cpat: If only we would. Unafraid. Boldly. Thank you C!

Larry: Just lil ole me really..with a great big guardian of my heart spirit I suppose. Many thanks!

Janet: "from a poets hands...comes humility from loves hand comes forgiveness."
You see so clearly. You are a gift to me. Many smiles dear Lady.

RsWells: Thank you for thinking so. I wish I had approached that threshold sooner. Lesson learned!

Bill: Yes..so important those words. I have to write them across my heart! Thank you dear Poet.

Noah: May Love's hand deliver the same to you sweet poet! Many hugs..and lots of love.

Floria: I admitt..I wrote in that fragile time..it makes a difference. Thank you for noticing and for your thoughts.

Seymour: Always so glad to see you here Sy! Thank you so much.

Martie: your thoughts are treasures..hoping you know there is mutual admiration. You inspire me. Thank you so much.

Carrie: So glad to hear from you! Oh yes...It was hard for me too. The truth hurt. The gentle was in the voice. I listened..the healing was so much easier than the pain. It was a gift. Thank you so much!

Sven: Thank you friend. I appreciate you so!

Amy: Hi there! So glad to see you here again! I am blessed to be in your company! It is a poets honor to connect that way. Thank you so very much.

Sue: And YOU..you are an ocean of inspiration! You are that message in a bottle that says "Life is Grand, Live It" That is what I receive in your words. A thousand thanks!!

Thank you all so much.

Peace and Poetry!!

Sincerely,
Regina

rwood
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19 posted 2002-02-22 08:28 PM


Sandra: Exactly..if we let it. Thanks so much for your words!

Lady: Thank you for allowing me to offer such to you and others. I receive much more than I give here. I hope to balance that out one day! Hugs!!

Sincerely,
Regina

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2002-02-22 09:10 PM


Beautiful...word after word...James
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21 posted 2002-02-22 10:16 PM


even as my arms were folded up
as I walked away
pouting like a child
who didn’t get her way

Regina, Simply wonderful !! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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