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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2002-02-22 12:33 PM



A Million Years Ago  2-21-02

Looking at the raindrops,
On my windshield as I drive...
I wonder where I'm going,
What awaits when I arrive?

I wonder what the future...
If there be one, holds in store-
And every year that passes,
Makes me wonder, more and more.

Fighting gusts of wind-
Which try to blow me off the road.
Make me think of rodeos-
And times that I got throwed.

Motels on the roadside-
Take me back, and that is true...
But every single thing I see-
Speaks to me of you.

Long distance conversations-
From a hundred small-town shows.
Yuma in the summer-
Battle Mountain, where I froze...

Bacon by the roadside...
Sleeping in the truck...
And the kisses you would give me...
All those times you wished me luck.

Those were happy, simple times...
I miss them, don't you know?
But this is now, and that was then-
A million years ago.

© Copyright 2002 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2002-02-22 12:36 PM


I have heard some cowboy poets in my day, spending more than half my life in cowboy states...and you, sir, truly are a gifted poet.  I ADORE your work and can't wait to read more.
ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2002-02-22 12:42 PM


silly me thinking you would take me back to prehistory..lol..the title does suggest that the affection you had has been 'ages ago'..I can relate to this too..


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-02-22 01:28 AM


Enjoyed...well written...James
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2002-02-23 01:57 PM



Gunslinger-
Yet another cowboy masterpiece from your pen.
Absolutely wonderful...I LOVE IT!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

marya2
Junior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 36

5 posted 2002-02-23 02:37 PM


hey i should of been a cowgirl you know?
saddle me up and all that.  Got any more stories like this?  This is like a marshmallow over a roasted fire

marya

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since 2000-12-17
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6 posted 2002-02-23 03:26 PM




BRAVO!!! Ooohhhh...this is another wonderful cowboy classic, sweet friend, we all wish you many more wonderful happy memories to hold onto forever from here! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a  beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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