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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I can taste it now. The bloodless copper Of your not listening Or even pretending to. Split lipped From the ignoring blows I can only swallow And fight rising bile Threatening to gag My lips to silence. Knowing the scars Will long be tender catching ragged edges of everyday to remind me I can taste it. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It's heard to be ignored and you penned it perfectly  |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A biting write and a hell of a way to diet. Enjoyed |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Powerful words indeed... well done! ~Tier |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, I like this very much! *S* The hurt is indeed physical... well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Such sorrow and anguish fill your words, dearest friend, my heart goes out to you and I pray soon that comfort will ease the pain and you will feel true happiness that will way outshadow the pain only left as scars of memories! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I have known that feeling, Cpat...and you portrayed it perfectly.... Very very good job!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!You captured it so clearly I could feel myself cringe....Magnificent....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So much in so little... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Strong poem C. So strong it permeates the senses. Hoping something more palatable and desired will soothe. So glad to have you here again. Sincerely, Regina |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ron,I felt this stab me right in the heart. You said a lot here. Sandra |
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