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vandana
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0 posted 2002-02-20 05:35 PM



Thought of you
Thought of a sun
That lost It Is dream
Into a light
Thought of love,
love that
would make my mind
missing you
Thought of memories
Iam lost
In a song
A song that was sung
by you
Thoughts of you
thoughts of you and me
Roses ,
Walking through a rain
A rain that brought me
A memory
Thought of you
Thought are on my mind
Never changed a bit,
Thoughts are always
On my mind
Thoughts of you
Thoughts of you and me
The candle was lit
by me
In a memory of all
the dreams
we had it
a long ago
Thoughts of you
and me
Never changes
In time
And the season
Thoughts of you and me
Thoughts of a reason
why In a fisrt place
Where I see your face
In a dream
Thoughts....

[This message has been edited by vandana (02-20-2002 05:37 PM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2002-02-20 05:54 PM


Nicely done my friend... I enjoyed!

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-02-20 05:57 PM


vandana - enjoyed this write, many thoughts, and many meanings in it...

BC

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3 posted 2002-02-20 06:46 PM


Vandana, you do this so well. Love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-02-20 07:31 PM




YAY!!! Oooohhh....this is soooooo gorgeous, your beautiful words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) May these thoughts of joy forever shine in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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5 posted 2002-02-21 12:27 PM


problem is as the time progresses so the freshness of those memories tend to fade..nicely penned


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-02-21 02:24 AM


Yes I have someone I think about a lot...James
vlraynes
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7 posted 2002-02-22 12:30 PM



vandana-
I truly enjoyed these lovely thoughts.
Beautifully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2002-02-22 12:46 PM


These are some good thoughts Vandana!
always a pleasure to read your work

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