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0 posted 2002-02-20 01:31 AM




Soft Love

In the dark of night
Your sweet tender love
Is what I look for

My heart is searching
Wanting you close for all time
To be by my side

My soul is wanting
To dance with yours, become one
Savor our soft love

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-20 01:44 AM


That makes two of us!  Heartfelt write, Tara.
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2 posted 2002-02-20 03:08 AM


Lovely...James
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3 posted 2002-02-20 08:15 AM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish for your true love to find his way to you and touch your heart always with soft loves beauty! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-20 09:50 AM


Tara - soft and flowing - lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2002-02-20 10:07 AM


enjoyed
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6 posted 2002-02-20 11:31 AM


Tara~

this flows, with your touch of softness...very lovely...


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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7 posted 2002-02-20 12:06 PM


Oh you do these so well Rosepetals25, just love this, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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8 posted 2002-02-20 01:25 PM


Duncan - Thanks for stopping in

James - Thank you.

Noah - You are the sweet one my friend, thanks for reading.

vandana - I'm glad.

Lauren - Thank you for your nice words

Floria - I'm glad you stopped in .. thank you.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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