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vandana
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0 posted 2002-02-14 05:25 PM



Standing outside
In the rain
The stars are on the sky
Wonder
How many stars are out there?
Tonight
Wonder If It Is true
That you are gone
and never come back to me
In my life
Is It true
what whole world say about me
That Iam crazy
and waiting for your love
will return to me,
In my heart
I know the time and
this moment will bring me
happiness
So I pray for this day will
come to me
and let the days shine
When the stars are so bright
Time will be right
between us
Standing outside
In the rain
Looking back at those years
And days of love were so
precious to me
Knowing
waiting for your return
Outside
In the rain
All the time
praying you would come back
In my life

[This message has been edited by vandana (02-14-2002 05:27 PM).]

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2002-02-14 08:30 PM



vandana-
Lovely poem of undying hope.
May all your hopes and dreams come true.
Happy Valentine's Day, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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2 posted 2002-02-14 09:33 PM



Very nice, Vandana...

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3 posted 2002-02-14 09:38 PM




(big hugggsssssss) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope you have found true love now and now you are forever welcomed inside of loves heart to be happy forever!(kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-14 09:56 PM


As you would so graciously say...enjoyed...
Thank you...

RosePetal
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5 posted 2002-02-14 10:03 PM


keep the faith my friend! Happy Valentines Day!
Enjoyed

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